Mourning the Death of a Wonderful Soul

Previously on The Soul Talks, I had mentioned about my award. The award which I had received the Awesome Impact Award. In case you’ve missed it, here’s the link: http://thesoultalks10.com/awesome-impact-award-my-first-award/

Today, I am going to portray a poem in the memory of the son losing his mother. Just by imagining, I lose my weight, imagine the people or the son’s who go through the suffering. This one is in their memory.

 

Mourning the Death of a Wonderful Soul

I wish time could pause and the world could stop,

Cus my eyes are wet and there’s no teardrop!

My life now filled with pure agony,

Still I see her face smiling outta the balcony…

I pray to God every day that ‘Can I see her sight once again?’

I looked into her eyes, I felt her pain, life’s insane!

Filled with twists and turns: is life.

There are more cuts in my heart than you could do with a knife.

Its hard to me to even walk silently,

Can you gimme that ‘aanchal?’ I plea………..

Growing with your support made me strong,

I feel all weak, life’s become a mess: now that you’ve gone.

The hand which had her blessing on me is now no more,

I wish I could find her near the waters or the shore.

 

Mom’s are the greatest individual on the planet, she bares all the pain or adjusts to any conditions and always gives out a smile and promotes love.

Its correctly written in James 1:17 that “Every good gift and every perfect gift is from above, coming down from the Father of lights with whom there is no variation or shadow due to change.”

I hope you liked this poem and please do comment down below your views. As recently a huge personality has lost his mom and if you could comment down condolences for him then I’d be grateful. He’s a very humble man and a beautiful soul.

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Piyush Choudhary

I see people hide their emotions and shut them down. Why on earth do you do that? If such is the case then stop breathing... I mean I don't mean that thing seriously but all I want to say is "Express Yourself!"

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  1. Each and every line squelches heart 🙁
    Can’t imagine a world without her <3
    Beautifully penned !
    I know it's not an easy task to be back to the normal life ..
    May her soul rest in peace..
    Lots of love for him/her from my side <3

    1. I am sure your wishes would definitely reach her. Thank you Meera for reading. 🙂 🙂

  2. Astonishingly astonishing poem
    I could feel it
    Iiked the theme very much , its really touching
    Mom’s are the greatest individual on the planet, she bares all the pain or adjusts to any conditions and always gives out a smile and promotes love : soooo true words .
    Great work
    Keep sharing 💙

    1. Thank you Akshaya! It wrenches my heart just on the thought, a close one dear to me lost his mom…it must be really very tough for him.

  3. The thought is heart breaking ………you have beautifully captured the emotion in your words

  4. Awesome poem Piyush and feel the pain of your friend who has lost his precious mother and a mother is a pillar of strength and I simply loved every stanza of your poem. Too good.

  5. There’s nothing more painful than loosing one’s Mom. Give a hug to your friend from me. You conveyed the pain of losing a mother hear wrenchingly good.

  6. Sad and Heart touching poem 🙁

    1. Its really very sad just to even think… wonder what it must be for the people who face it in real.

      1. True. May the strength of God be with them always.

          1. My pleasure 🙂

          2. My pleasure

  7. The worst loss indeed Piyush. The emptiness never goes away.

    1. It never goes way, you just live w it! It makes your mind strong but weakens your heart!

  8. Beautiful. Writing helps to let out what needs to come out. I send a lot of energy! All the best!

  9. Powerful, I’m really moved by this. I understand it. Thanks for sharing with us.

  10. “There are more cuts in my heart that you could do with a knife” Wow! How beautifully the feeling is expressed.

    Warm Regards
    Amrita 💕

    1. Thank you Amrita. It was indeed a very emotional piece. I’m happy that you liked it.

  11. This was absolutely well written. Each and every word form a heart that feels deeply.

    1. It was an effort to depict sheer agony in the memory of losing a mother. I hope you had a good time reading.

  12. A very soulful poem. It wrenches one’s heart to think a situation l,ike this. . My heartfelt condolences to ur friend. May the Good Lord give him the strength to sail thru this phase. Piyush this is one of your emotional best. Please along with your soul talks continue writing such soulful poems too. It’s truly a delight.

    1. I am truly delighted Anamika!😊 Thank you for your condolences and I will give my 100% to write which you find it worth reading!

      1. Piyush you are a delight to read, always write from your heart just like how u did now. I really wonder why u didn’t share thiz in Pencliff…….. and for that matter even the latest post also u didnt post there

        1. I mean I don’t know why I didn’t post there but If you say I will def do that! You know Anamika, you’ve been a constant support out here which feels pumped that you know if there’s ‘a reason to push’ glory comes quick. Thanks!❤️

          1. Haha, u r a man who weaves ways with your wordz Piyush. It’s totally ur wish as to repost if in Pencliff. You take care Piyush.

          2. I mean A bird only weaves a nest on a tree which seems good. I mean you leave me awestruck with your comments which makes me want to ‘match your level’

          3. Oh, I am honoured by your words Piyush. You flatter me too much. Thank you so much for your kind words.

          4. If its meant to be…it’ll be! You deserve the kindness or the good words cus you know you’re meant for it. Take care of yourself Anamika! This week or this month might have been a bit low for you but I feel a smile can cure it all! Keep smiling and remember that after a dark night, there’s a bright morning.

            P.S. posted the poem on Pencliff😂

          5. Thank you so much Piyush. Yes it has been a bit low tines but thanks for those caring words. Yes i understand there is a light at the end of every dark tunnel. I will be brave. You take good care of yourself and ur mom and dad too. May the Good Lord guide you and keep you in every step of urs. And yes, i will check out there too. Mine too is there.

          6. Anamika, I pray to God that ‘aapke sath sab thik rahe’ Yk Bieber in his song ‘Life is Worth Living’ said ‘God is good in the midst of evil and darkness’ Thank you Anamika and I wish you the absolute strength and sheer happiness and joy! God Bless dear❤️

          7. Thank you, so much for these wonderful words which is so calming. Yes it’s cent percent right when it is said ” God is good in the midst of evil and darkness’ . Thanks so much for the prayers and well wishes . You take good care of urself too.

          8. You know I’m good and when previously I was down we had a word so I feel ‘Its just not return-time but also as a human which connects w another human’ you’re down and my hand’s there to lift you up!

          9. Ya, i remember. And thank you my friend for all your support and those words. Some words has the power to heal and yours sure did help.

  13. Beautifully written. I appreciate this read. 🙏🏽✨

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